Very original with a great flow

A very good poem. I really enjoyed the way you used the title in every stanza. It was a nice write!
Charisma*

Oh, I love how I reccomended that every stanza end with with name... well actually, I told you to do it. CREDIT THEIF. 1/5!!! jk, I already rated 5/5

I love this poem it is like the best i have ever read
please talk to me about you skills if your ok with that
please tell me when you thought about becoming a poet!!

Wow. this is good. original. && i love how the words like all flow.

F-IN A MAN!!! this happens all the time! ur a great writer. ps....its ok to change ur mind!!lol

Thank you very much for your comment on my poem "Girl In Mirror". I always appreciate honesty whether it's good or bad. I think we got off on the wrong foot. This poem was amazing though. Seriously. I loved how you repeated certain lines and kept the same rhythm throughout the poem. Great job. 5/5. Take care.

U HAVE MAD TALENT 2 B SO YOUNG THOUGH, LYRIC

"Life is the beginning,
So death must be the end." That is my fave line from this poem. I really like how the feelings are really strong.
Brilliant work,
Astryd