Comments : If I Was...

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Thats so damn sweet.
    You live in my heart too =)
    Actually, you kinda 'own' my heart bbz, yours to do with what you will =)
    I love you loads
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww thats well cute =]=]=]=]
    bless ya
    x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awww again its jsut filled wit so much emotion awesome jobbb

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Another poem where you illustrate strong raw feelings with minimal lines. this is so cute and sweet, i think the last two lines are quite powerful, and are really strong when you think a lot about them.