Tis a well written poem hun yus!
how come its in funny tho?
just a minor enquiry but its still really good tho =]=]=]=]

Luv'age
x x x x

I put it here Jen cos its coming from an irate teenagers point of view.

I find this poem true and realy really good... but when is your poems not good........ GREAT JOB 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

Yeah i guess all thoughs memories of being with your lover side by side are there for you 2 remeber and avoid thoughs feeling :S kinda lashed out on u but i cant ever say i dont wana fal in love because i've already said ill give up anything for love //..\\ overall this poem was ight :P
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Peace
Anthony

Wow finally someone who knows how i feel, lol awesome write, couldn't have described how i'm feeling so perfectly:) I loved It!

I think everyon can relate to this...it makes it very powerful! I like it

Lol, and to think i wrote it on a whim one day
Thank you everyone! xx

This is really very nice...i didnt wanna fall in love either, it drove me crazy! still...evryone finds the rite one eventually...lol.

~rikki~

I don't wanna fall in love
Always thinking with my heart
So I don't need fixing up
Or help by cupids dart
^^^
I love the beginning stanza.
It just gives me an image of cupid lining up the old arrow and aiming it at one's behind...lol

(Not sure where to post so i'll put it here...
^^^
I was wondering why is was in the funny section. But is seems to be doing great in this section.
Often I find the funny poems are downvoted so much. Urghh
Yet it is my second favorite section, next to nature.

Wonderfully penned Gemma and a great read !

I loved it!!!!!!!!! it was awsome keep up the good work i loved the last line * you found him im glad u did lol 5/5 always ttyl
Kate~

I know that feeling its liek forever you try to make yourself think hes the one but you say ur in love and ur not and that hurts in worse bc u dont wanan be in love wit him and ur not but he thinks u are.. lol lol

anyways vry deep excellent rhythem and beat