I know exactly what you mean. Turns out that the girl definitely wasn't a true friend in my case. The best thing that you could do would be to either confront her or him about it. Anyways... the poem was really good and sounds like you really let your emotions out. Great job on this! 5/5

Thank you very much i just write how i feel and words flow thru my fingers to my pen....i cant talk openly to people so i write it and i get the point across...i have a tendency to hide

Well, so.. I know what thats like too, its pretty much happening right now, except the girl is my cousin but we are really close..its sucks.. anyway I love your poem, its really good, you really have a way of keeping my attention in your writing, great job!

Remember me ashley. no matter what everyone else does to you, you've had me for around 11 years, you will always have me!!

-hang tough!-