When I first Saw You

by Ella Agee   Nov 9, 2006


When I first walked in I saw your eyes
Thats when I knew you were my first love
My hands trembled as you walked to my table
Sweat poured down my face as I looked up at you and smiled
You asked if I was OK and I said yes
My heart began to pound when you touched my hand
Thats when I knew you were the one
Then I fainted when I finally said the words I LOVE YOU
And you responded with a kiss on the lips

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  • 18 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Mushy but good. i gave you a 5/5
    all your quotes. write something
    everyday. keep a little book with
    you. you never know when a thought
    going come worth writting. if you
    dream it get up right away write it
    down its so easy to forget stuff.
    i want to every thing you got.
    like i said befor i like your words
    sounds like a line from the movie
    slingblade. " I LIKES THE WAY YOU
    TALK" CY

  • 18 years ago

    by Shandra

    This is soo cute....i guess there is love at first sight.