Excellent work
5/5
wow.. as i read ur poem... i saw a peek of paradise !

awesome stuff... keep it going
ur very talented...
if u have time check my poem
murder or suicide
im sure u'll like it
pls vote & comment

take care
love
amy

This was a good poem, nature is a beautiful thing
xxxxx

That was an amazing poem! everything u said is exactly what people think about when they think of the beach. i liked this style where u repeated the first line in all stanzas and then the lines after it were about when that happens. very hard to do but u pulled it off amazingly.

LoL, okay, I have to comment on this one. I love it! Beautiful beautiful poem. Keep it up