All I do is hear you say I\'m watchin you
One wish...I wish you were here to see the things I've done
I wish you were here, you'd be so proud
I wish you were here to celebrate our birthday with me
I wish you were here because I'm barely getting by
I miss our talks, its just the simple things
But we still do these things but only in my dreams
I wish-I wish you were here with me and our family
And to see the things i've done
I wish you were here you'd be so proud
And thats all I know to say thats all i know to pray
But sometimes I wonder why
you couldn't still be here with me
Its making me real fustrated
I'm trying to stay strong barely holding on
I know I'll see you again
but for right now rest in peace
And when I get to heaven first thing they\'ll say to me
Tell me have you seen______, find out where you are
run into your arms, wrap your wings around me and whisper
In my ear \"Well Done\"
I wish you were here you'd be so proud of me
The concept of the poem is rele good ... but i will say only one thing ...try to make a little rhyming ...cause whn ur reading it dosent fell like a poem.....other thn tht its rele great ...