Comments : Wish you Were Here

  • 18 years ago

    by davia

    Thats good

  • 18 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Powerful stuff. nice =)

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    The concept of the poem is rele good ... but i will say only one thing ...try to make a little rhyming ...cause whn ur reading it dosent fell like a poem.....other thn tht its rele great ...