Internal thoughts and Confusion

by HuggyQueenofCookies   Nov 9, 2006


**I love you.
~In pain.
**Make up, sure okay.
~Hurts.
**Yeah, I'm sorry too.
~Why hide it anymore?
**Everything is okay again.
~Cant look at you without hurting.
**Why still have this bad vibe?~cant go out there..
**okay...must of checked out..
~can't..
**whats going on..
~I'll give him this to tell her.I hope she understands..
**I loved him..
~free
**pain..never again....

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  • 18 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    OMFG..Gramma you are hilarious..how'd you'd find that name?? lol. *kisses!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Dear HuggyQueenOfCookies.....I stumbled over this author in my travels through poemspace..and I just think you might want to see the name.......

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=227009

    Peace,
    Gramma Concept

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was VERY different I must admit! Different in a good way actually..I've never read anything quite like this...I do suggest you take out all the ~* out of your poem because it distracts the reader from your poem (at least when I was a beginner writer 3 years ago thats what I was told....There were parts of this poem that didn't make sense to me...But I love the idea of this and what your trying to do to this poem....keep writing..I'll keep reading!
    Chelsey

  • 18 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Nope..almost! Two peoples, internal thoughts:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...............Internal Dialogue...................

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