...............Internal Dialogue...................

Nope..almost! Two peoples, internal thoughts:)

This was VERY different I must admit! Different in a good way actually..I've never read anything quite like this...I do suggest you take out all the ~* out of your poem because it distracts the reader from your poem (at least when I was a beginner writer 3 years ago thats what I was told....There were parts of this poem that didn't make sense to me...But I love the idea of this and what your trying to do to this poem....keep writing..I'll keep reading!
Chelsey

Dear HuggyQueenOfCookies.....I stumbled over this author in my travels through poemspace..and I just think you might want to see the name.......

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=227009

Peace,
Gramma Concept

OMFG..Gramma you are hilarious..how'd you'd find that name?? lol. *kisses!