The night is filled with twists and turns {Parquette}

by disturbed one   Nov 9, 2006


This poem really sucks but its the first one ive ever done(of parquette) and the first time ive heard of this type...so here goes....hope you dont hate it tooo much =\\

The night is filled with twists and turns

The night is filled with twists and turns,
As Gods crimson tears flow through my gaping wrists,
Living my life behind lies and deceit,
I begin to cry as the wounds start to burn,

The night is filled with twists and turns,
I try to divert the pain by clenching my fists,
I cringe knowing Im about to be beat,
Preoccupied by thoughts, Why do I exist,

The night is filled with twists and turns,
My mind is sending me into my own retreat,
Trying to act like the pain, I dont consist,
But Im getting closer to my defeat,

The night is filled with twists and turns,
I will let go if this feeling persists,
I can finally end this life of deceit,
My days are now entering the last stage; complete

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessie

    Aw, don't be sad *hug*

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Lol thanks...ya the poems rhyme scheme is Abca Abcb Acbc Abcc...then first line has to be the same everytime

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    This poem definitely doesn't suck. I'm not saying its your best though, because its not... The only thing I didn't like about this poem was when the first line was repeated throughout, it didn't flow well (thats probably the type of poem though) So i think the only things is that I don't like that kind of poem... Other than that repeating I like it alot! .... And I hope you can understand what I just said because its kind of confusing... lol Keep up the good work!

    xxEvilAngelxx

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