This poem definitely doesn't suck. I'm not saying its your best though, because its not... The only thing I didn't like about this poem was when the first line was repeated throughout, it didn't flow well (thats probably the type of poem though) So i think the only things is that I don't like that kind of poem... Other than that repeating I like it alot! .... And I hope you can understand what I just said because its kind of confusing... lol Keep up the good work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Lol thanks...ya the poems rhyme scheme is Abca Abcb Acbc Abcc...then first line has to be the same everytime

Aw, don't be sad *hug*