Lovely workk!! ((I'd feel bad saying beautiful again. =P)) Keep it up!! 5/5. 0.~

**Lor

It was great.. thanx for the comment on mine.. it can be really confusing... ttyl

Wow.. my favorite out of all the ones ive read.. amazing write.. keep it up

The flow was really good!
and the rhyme as well...
left me speachless... 5/5

This was quick a fast paced poem with very good wording i liked it a lot 5/5