Solitude

This poem was ok but it could have been better u could have added more to it to explain the old woman and her lonliness but it was good 4/5 sorry

In the second stanza last line. you said

'Like and old film-strip.' i think you ment to put an?

the flow of this is off. in multiple places.

and it got confusing since you didnt break up the stanza's the same.

on a better note. i really liked the title and how its potrayed in this poem.

-liz

Another great poem.. very sad.. but realy great imagery.. and nice flow.. spectacular write

Not a big rhymer, eh? Thats okay.. I favor rhyming me self, but you impressed me without it. :) I loved this stanza:
The past on which she dwells,
Brings her back memories of youth,
She once contained,
Like a graceful dove,
A courageous lion,
A stubborn mare.

Amazing Job babe!

5/5

You're a beautiful writer. Keep writing!! o.~

**Lor