Dream

by elvenfire   Nov 10, 2006


Break your heart one two many time
And you'll never have it whole
A wound unhealed, when cut again
The bleeding kills your soul

When you give when you have nothing
The darkness creeps inside
And when you lie on your bed at night
Your despair steals all light

When you love more than enough
You lose your heart and find
That dreams become your opium
Life exists only in your mind

Yes you know what lies behind it
A doorway through to hell
Yet you run and trip and crawling
And reach to ring the bell

You're crashing down and burning up
From all your greed and need
You think so this is what life's about
It's just a heated dream.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I love the last paragraph it is really impressive, and it has nice flow, one thing though, some of the things u say in ur paragraphs dont mix well and dont really make sense for example

    "And when you lie on your bed at night
    Your shadow steals all light"

    What does that mean? how does the shadow steal all the light when u just lay on ur bed....like..errrrr 0_o
    and also..
    "The bleeding kills your soul"
    Blood has nothing to do with ur soul, ur soul can fade or drip but it is ur essence ur core, its not a physical thing, there for ur getting confuzzed and also there are others but i just said a few, I think there is work to be done here but once you do it this poem will be really good,
    Nice work though,
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