I love the last paragraph it is really impressive, and it has nice flow, one thing though, some of the things u say in ur paragraphs dont mix well and dont really make sense for example

"And when you lie on your bed at night
Your shadow steals all light"

What does that mean? how does the shadow steal all the light when u just lay on ur bed....like..errrrr 0_o
and also..
"The bleeding kills your soul"
Blood has nothing to do with ur soul, ur soul can fade or drip but it is ur essence ur core, its not a physical thing, there for ur getting confuzzed and also there are others but i just said a few, I think there is work to be done here but once you do it this poem will be really good,
Nice work though,
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