Very good! i loved ittt! 5/5 keep up the good work! and thanks for commenting on my poem!!(=

Jeanette

=[ is this about a love u have that cannot show... for fear of the consequences?? its a gr8 poem!! plz read my poems, i write about the same thing =[ comment on them if u like them and understand them... thank-you x

This is a very good poem kitty, it flows together perfectly, i didnt see any flaws, 5/5!!! thanx for the comment on my poem

Wow, this is really well written!

Narc xxx

I loved your choice of words, theres nothing i would change. keep it up!
much love and many kisses,
bex