Beautiful. Delicate and engaging. I loved the way it built up into a kiss that spread out. Lovely.

I love how you used the word "delicate" to describe a kiss, it's very sensual =)
short, yet very stalwart.
looks like you got it in the hoop, 5;5

That was beautiful. The word choice was simply perfect. I praise specific forms of poetry easily, because I think writing in a form such as a malisus is very difficult to do. So well done on pulling it off to great effect. 5/5.

So cute, so sweet. I loved this poem, so much
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Again you sure do like challenges.. I think I'll try it sometime... Seems kinda hard, but I will try :P.. Now the poem... I LOVED IT! simply and perfect... Simply Perfect..
Awesome Job
5/5

Awh! For such a short piece, you created such a beautiful, heart warming feel. I found this form a little difficult to do, but you've made it look really easy. It was beautiful, wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I liked this, I thought it was really cute and sweet.
For a poem so short, you managed to get a lot of emotion and feeling into it, and I liked the style.

Ooo. This was original for this style. You kept the idea throughout the whole thing, evern though it's short, along with the emotion.

I can't much say anything about the flow, but I guess I can say it was good enough for me lol. This style looks hard to improve upon, and you seemed to have done an excellent job with it. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha