by aDORKable x3 Nov 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Mystery hides deep in my heart. |
by Michelle18
Well done...another excellent poem! |
by Mommy And Me
Im not sure why... but this poem made me cry a little bit. it was well written. as all your work i read. lol great work. |
by Kayla
Very nice poem!! i couldn't find one word through out the piece without strong meaning behind it! awesome job!!! keep it up!! |
Wow fabulous. u made a hard rhym sheme work..and well...keep it up. 5/5 |
I like it, it's hard to do and you still pulled it off, it seems like some of it is forced though but other than that its good |