Hey :] well done on this poem Hun, this was a nice heartfelt piece and was a very enjoyable read.. Excellent xx

Nice Nice Nice..
I like the format
Love the Words
You can feel the heart
and wonderful detail
awesome job
5/5
~MF~

I like it, it's hard to do and you still pulled it off, it seems like some of it is forced though but other than that its good

Mia

Wow fabulous. u made a hard rhym sheme work..and well...keep it up. 5/5

Very nice poem!! i couldn't find one word through out the piece without strong meaning behind it! awesome job!!! keep it up!!
xox.kayla.xox

Im not sure why... but this poem made me cry a little bit. it was well written. as all your work i read. lol great work.
:)

-/2 Terra

Well done...another excellent poem!