Another wonderful poem from you Gem, this was sad and it touched me. Thats a horrible situation to be in too :( well great work and keep well 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Awww thats a rather emotion poem =]
and has an alternate rhyming scheme =]

~*~Jen~*~

This is a good one because thats how most people are when there worried, always calling and thinking the worse can happen, I really love how you can put huamn emotion into all your poems... Great job, 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

Kinda reminds me of my mom ^^ i usaully dont worry about someone 2 much as they do what they do but when i know that a person is no more then 10 mins late or i know they would call if change of plans then ur poem would kick in and the search would begin

great poem
5/5
Peace
Anthony

Well it was a great idea to post it here!! :)
everyone goes thru this its very well writen like all your poems i love each and every single one :))

Oh its good.
Great poem, its a horrible situation to find yourself in but it happens. You get the story across really well.
Yes - its another 5/5

Kelly
xx

I liked it...sounds like a poem for worriers, mothers, anyone who cares for anyone! Good job!
Charisma*

Hey, thats a really amazing poem. I love the topic too. Its just perfect. keep writting hun!

thalliday♥

Woww thats deep and i kno what u mean its tough when ur lvoe is doin sumthn and ur worrying..but in the end everything always turns out okay and when you were missing them jsut seems to fade ;) :) excellent.

Ah dnt ya hate that when they dnt pick up there phone =p n then ya get worrying and in the end theyre fine :S l0l anyway great poem i can definitely relate to this one xx

Love it!
Very emotional!
xoxo

P.S. Write some poems sweetie! And yeah, I know how you feel about the subject things. Why so depressed babe?