Omg ......its simply amazing ......amazing ......i rele like the the idea

Katie,
This message of the poem is great. But you might want to try to hit enter every place there is a common or period. It will make it easier to read. & I think it kind of helps with flow, but that's just me. =/ I hope you don't mind me saying that. Just a suggestion.
Heather

Great poem 5/5