Very sad, but greatly written....... another 5/5 from me...

That is sad....but yet gr8!!!!
Keep it up
Jennifer

Sad, and utterly depressing.
Yet so WONDERFULLY WRITTEN! *cheers and throws confetti* You should be proud of yourself, and don't worry about what other people think when it comes to making writing your career. Just do it if it feels right, and if people have sense, they'll appreciate you for being true to yourself. ^^