by Emily McCarter Nov 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
David could make me happy or crazy with anger, quicker then anyone i'd ever know, And when he smiled everything else disappeared and i could not help but smile back. He had a million smiles, But there was one in particular that i could even hear in his voice across the phone from miles away. It was playful and knowing and cynical and sincere and secretive and assertive and a thousand other paradoxical thing all at once. That smile made me laugh when i was hurting, forgive him when i was angry and believe him even when i knew he was lying. That smile made me fall in love with him-and that was the last thing i ever wanted to do. |
That poem made me cry. it reminded me of my first love and my ex-bf. it touched my heart. write more like these. excellent job!! 10/10 |
by tinna
So sad but yet beautiful! makes me think of my first love, well done 5/5!! |