Comments : David's Smiles

  • 18 years ago

    by tinna

    So sad but yet beautiful! makes me think of my first love, well done 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by MidnightKisses

    That poem made me cry. it reminded me of my first love and my ex-bf. it touched my heart. write more like these. excellent job!! 10/10