This reminds me of the country song whisky lullaby. one of my favorites. good job.

Wow, thanks for the comment on my new poem. && i agree this poem strongly resembles Whiskey Lullaby. Great Poem. Good Song. =D

Yes I agree with everbody else.The whole time I was reading this poem I was thinking about the song Whiskey Lullaby(which just happens to be one of my favorite songs)Sorry to say this but it to me, it seemed like you were just changing it up a little.It's not really...original you know?But anyways because of that I'm going to give you a 4/5

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"whiskey lullaby" by brad paisley. sound firmiliar?

So sad, yet so beautiful.