Broken Angel.

by in spite of love   Nov 11, 2006


Clear eyes of crimson red,
A broken hearted angel,
For you cant laugh when your soul is dead,
She's willing but unable.

When she tries she plans to succeed,
Yet she remains outspoken,
Her argument may be strong,
But no hope, no pride, no silly joy, her life is now a token.

She is just his play-thing now,
A silly little bet,
He doesn't care if he wins or loses,
Losing her is not a threat.

She knows she doesn't mean anything,
So, why does she hang on?
She knows he doesn't care anymore,
She should just move on.

So go now angel, fly away,
Spread those broken wings,
Fly now angel, don't look back...
Break those puppet strings.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cursed

    Beautiful poem my darling...

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    WOW!...that was amazing!...you have such amazing talent that many people, including me, wish that they had more of...btw thanks for the comment!...comment back?! haha

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    I like this poem, a lot. I like how you used "puppet strings" it was pretty creative. Good job writing it.

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkPoetess

    That was awesome...i loved the emotion and power behind ur words...thx 4 a truely wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by girl

    That's like the BEST poem i have ever read no exzgeration or however you spell it it's so awsome i LUV IT! espeacialy the end so dramatic!