My true feelings

by waiting 4 some1   Nov 11, 2006


I am tired of thinking, what should I write to you
How to express my feelings towards someone like you
But now I will not think what I should write to you any more
Because I will say it directly that you, is what I am looking for

A male or female it does not matter what you are
I loved you and its enough for me to go this far

No matter what you think of me I will always love you
And I will keep on saying it until I hear you say it too

Actually I know exactly how you feel towards me
But I am trying my best to let you accept me

I told you my true feelings without any shame
And I am not forcing you to feel the same

Because opposite to the others I understand
That loving the others is not in our hands

But at least give me some cares
Give me something to share
So I can wait peacefully in my lair

I will wait for your love and I will wait for your return
But be aware that I am a candle; I may last or may burn

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    This is a gorgeous poem... i really liked it =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...I feel the same about this part

    I am tired of thinking, what should I write to you
    How to express my feelings towards someone like you
    But now I will not think what I should write to you any more
    Because I will say it directly that you, is what I am looking for

    Good write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by heartaches808

    Honestly...it great :]

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    LOVE the last 2 lines. GREAT poem keep up the great work! and may you find happiness

    XxXKristie MarieXxX

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Omigosh...u are really a great writer..keep it up..