This is a good poem. I think it's sweet. You really express your feelings. It has a good flow.

"no matter what you think of me i will always love you
and i will keep on saying it until i hear you say it too"

^ I really liked that part. Keep writing.

I really like this poem, you let out your emotions and were honest. I just love it! Keep it up amazing!
buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

So well written!! I love it!! It has such good emotion!! Keep up the good work!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Iiiiiiii loved it very much :):):)

you really know how to show your feelings
espesially when it come to talk about friends :):)

good work:):) pal:):)

What a wicked poem. its superb!!!

I like this one...nice poem...full of love:)..5/5
your friend..... *Melody*:)...god bless...and all the best!:)

I really like this poem good job

I really like this poem it makes me think of when me and my girlfriend were going out she really cared about what people thought and i told her that until she got over that fear that it was over and she didnt have to come back to em if she didnt feel comfortable but she did come back but anywz i loved the poem and it gave me a certain feeling and thought about what u were trying to say but i really enjoyed it thatnk you 4 writting it.

Great!!!

God bless u

Very, Veery good! She is very lucky..lol

Soooooooooo deep.

heartfelt.

salwa

If they feel the same about, they should really waste no time because you might burn as you have said, or they might be lucky and stil find you.

Written from within the heart is what I see from this poem. and trust me it is good!

Hi sweetie,

This is worth a 5/5 but if I were you, I would capitalize all my i's. Looks more professional, other than that: great poem by you. And I think it was a really courageous thing to do to openly declare your love to this person. That takes real courage. I have done this too and I think I may have got burned. But...when you keep your mouth shut, you never find out how the other one feels so...good on ya!!!

Best wishes,

ingrid, your big sis, hehe

Awww thats really sweet.
:) is it about a certain girl? or just something u thought of?
mhmm.. nice work
xx

Awww thats so beautiful! i love it, i love the words and erething. i can relate 2 dis one. 5/5 great work hun! thnx for commentin mine 2.
xx love

Wow.. what a guy understand like you do. It hard to find and I am glad u put out your honest and your emotion to this.. Seem sensitve feelings and it's heart-felt. I really enjoy reading this. Not rerget reading wen I read your first poem. You're blessed and keep up everything u have to be good at.

OH MY GOD! i love it. its so real and there is such a truth in this poem. its so powerfully written, the languge used is perfect. the flow was good.

"I told you my true feelings without any shame
And I am not forcing you to feel the same"

i loved these lines. love cannot be forced and these lines sum that up perfectly!!!
GREAT WRITE!!!
xx
Taegan Emily

Nice... keep on waiting I see a light of hope finding it's way towards you

Omigosh...u are really a great writer..keep it up..

LOVE the last 2 lines. GREAT poem keep up the great work! and may you find happiness

XxXKristie MarieXxX