This is a fantastic poem. Ive never in my life read a poem dedicated to there teacher it's great it hink i was brave of you to put this up its so good i love it a lot im gald you wrote this cause it can insipre other writers.
XOX roxyxox

That was really lovely and I'm sure he would be proud to know he did such a good job.
The poem was really heartwarming and inspirational. Nicely done.

Lol. Cuute, a poem about your teacher... The flow was good as were the descriptions, the rhymes worked well, and the emotion was clear.. Nicely done hun, and dont worry, you'll get a nice new teacher! =] 5/5

This was a great poem... i loved the emotion and how you told all the things youll miss. great job!

5/5

Ohhhh... wow what a beautiful dedication! Dr Fern was lucky to have you as a student/friend.
Im sorry for you loss.
Its a really well written piece, the flow was perfect the whole way through and the rhyming was good, but a little cliche.

5/5
~`murder.

Ih..! thats so beautifully writtn, like form the soul, heart!

It was beautiful. =) I loved it. Very nice and sencere. I can't say that I know how it feels... but I know when a teacher becomes a friend and it's something real, because those are the last people you expect, yet once they're there, you realize what they're really like, it makes you think differently. As if... Why had I not noticed this before? or... Why had I not been friends with them earlier. Anyways, if any of that makes since, which it doesn't, heh... I think it was a good poem. = ) Nice job.

U can't understand how much I can relate to this poem...not the teacher part but the friend part. You spoke the words I couldn't. It makes me want to cry..
Thanx
Jonda Beth

Aww that was so sweet hun, i hope he got to read it!!

much love and many kisses,
bex

Awww hunni thast very very very good!! 6/5!! i felt exactly the same about my english teacher who had so much inspiration and faith. you couldnt have made a better job of this. well done x x x x x