Beneath The Surface

by Jessica   Nov 11, 2006


Chills run up my spine
A soul slowly turning cold
Maybe this is like a sign
Of what was about to unfold..

Blood stains soft wrists
Sobs echo deep inside
Curling fingers into fists
These tears, I must hide..

Leaving me alone to die
Watching me rip apart
Laughing at me as I cry
Slowly stabbing at my heart..

Salty tears keep increasing
Burning skin as they fall
Blood my body is releasing
Little drops of pain so small..

Emotions stuck in a throat
Escaping through wet eyes
No more do I think I can float
Silently pulled down by your lies..

Beneath the surface, I sink
Drowning in tears and blood
Tattooing my skin like ink
Pain, my floor it does flood..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    A great poem! I love this stanza! well penned! 5/5!

    Emotions stuck in a throat
    Escaping through wet eyes
    No more do I think I can float
    Silently pulled down by your lies..

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I don't think there is one poem of yours that doesn't wow me. Don't ever stop writing because you're awesome!
    5/5 again. God Bless.

    ~*TAy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Chilling poem. You created very real images. Now, I've got a challenge for you. See if you can write a freestyle just as good^_-. I think you can. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    This is a very sad piece. You did an excellent job writing it, though. Nice choice of words. My favorite stanza is the last one. 5/5.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good. I liked the discriptions in it. 5/5

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