Comments : Beneath The Surface

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I don't think there is one poem of yours that doesn't wow me. Don't ever stop writing because you're awesome!
    5/5 again. God Bless.

    ~*TAy*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    A great poem! I love this stanza! well penned! 5/5!

    Emotions stuck in a throat
    Escaping through wet eyes
    No more do I think I can float
    Silently pulled down by your lies..