Very strong emotion in that. Very well done. I liked it. 5/5. God Bless.

~*Tay*~

A perfect murder tragic quick way to say it. amazing. you are very talented && i personally love this poem it's quick && gets to the point.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

This is very well written. The style in which you wrote it made it even better. I had to read it twice to get it, but that's probably just me. =P Your word choice was great and you did a great job in writing this. =] 5/5

Tammie

I really enjoyed that. I like how you conveyed the actions and emotions vividly in a few short lines and stanzas.

Nice work.

A short but effective poem. I liked the way it just seemed to fit in with the length (if that makes sense).

Very well done.

I really like the language you use! The imagery is absolutely incredible. I like the descriptions allot, btu i was disappointed when it ended. I would suggest expanding it a bit.

Lol, i dont think its meant to be, but i found this poem kinda funny! soz i have a strange sense of humour! but i loved it anyway!!