Well done, i loved this, it was sad, but i was happy if ended the way it did. keep writing
xxxxxx

Normally i don't like the use of older words in modern poems, but "shone" works out very well in this case, good choice,
well thought out poem
keep it up :)

I like this poem in paticular because it's one that I can strangely relate to. :] It's a cute poem, and the rhyming was awesome. It's nice and short, and a good read, stuffed with all the emotion it needs for a good friendship.

5/5!

Thats a great poem its well written and i understand every word of the feeling of being loved and someone being there for you...thank you for the comment and thank you for pointing out the spelling error..thanks again Joclyn

Aww this poem was so cute ;-)
"And you kissed away my pain"
this line is soooooo adorable, it just made me think of having a boyfriend and letting him be your shoulder to cry on...i can't get over this poem.
the rhyming was excellent, didn't seem forced. aww 5;5

Just like your other poem, FANTASTIC! Another 5 from me, and thank you very muchly for the lovely comment.

Very sweet && amazing job you have done here again. sometimes people have feelings for their friends && their friends have feelings for them but it's better to be friends with them, then date && ruion something after words just incase. So i understand this feeling && poem you have put here.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.