Ahhhh, Lisa! this is fantastic!
i love it, i love it, i love it.

i envy your talent.
for serious.

my stuff is a snot rag compared to yours. ;P

i love you, booger!

WOW i want you to throw it away so i can steal it out of your trash can and claim it as my own i LUV IT!!!!!!

That poem, it's crap, its shit. Pure and utter rubbish.

I'm never going to get to say that about any of your poems if you keep writing fantastic quality poems like this :P

Holy peanuts, that was good!

"Now look me in my bitter eyes,
And beg for your sad useless life,
Watch as I hold such dangerous power,
Feel the steel of the sharpened knife.
Shall I fill this room with darkness,
Or watch you gasp for breath,
All that matters now my love,
Is my revenge; Your death."

Every single word there was so powerful and excellently written. Your poem was so full of hatred and anger, which was amazing. I loved it. 5/5.

Overpowering.
It was amazing.
Just like everything you've written.
I loved it.
Your poems are inspiring. =]
5/5
Lovce you. xx
-Heater

"Don't get heart broken, Get Revenge.
An eye for an eye,
A heart for a heart" That line is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this poem and all of your work!!!

~jas~

Wow, good work on this one. I liked your use of short, choppy sentences in some parts of the poem, they were very powerful and emphased your feeling of hatred toward whom ever your poem is direct toward. I really liked the division of stanzas into octets and the last one really stands out, with only three lines. Of course, each person would interpret this poem differently but your idea is broad enough that many people could relate to it. Great work, i really enjoyed reading your work.

--Steph

Wow. That was strong. I could feel the revenge. The only thing I really see that you need to add is the period at the end of the poem. your rhyming was nicely done, i enjoyed this. 5/5.

The emotion was strong throughout this poem and flowed nicely all your poems are nicely written. The ryhme scheme was great and m sure alot of people can relate to this poem in many different ways seeing as it can be interpreted in so many different ways. Really power poem. Well done~mel

Wow!! 5/5! i loved it ur very talented check out some of mine if ud like.

Very very powerful peice of write!

"Revenge is such a tasteful word,
Full of hatred and spite,
Oh how amazing is sweet revenge,
So deserving, so perfect, so right."

ooo!..i love these lines..the poem as a whole is filled with emotions and the perfect rhyme scheme added to the beauty and intensity of this write!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Very nice! i felt it! great write! keep it up!
God Bless!