Fire burn bright.

by ShootingStar179   Nov 11, 2006


Hallelujah, Hallelujah,
The lord is always providing in my life,
He gives me one friend to carry me through,
One will fade away as another comes in strife.

Somebody told me He was the best,
I put Him to test after test to see if it was true,
Alas it must have been,
He made me understand what friendship I would find in you.

I doubt as the weak soul I am,
I do not comprehend His wishes, as He knows,
The light I have inside was dying,
But I have opened it up for show.

Fire inside, please burn bright,
I am faltering in my purpose,
Yet I will regain my strength,
As I pray to Him with all my heart tonight.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Good poem! There were quite a few lines where the flow was very forced. One line would be a four word line and the next would ten words...........it makes it less pleasant for the reader to read!

    Good write though,
    -AnnMarie

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    I really liked this! there was one thing though....if you are going to use rhyming, make sure that all the stanzas follow the same pattern...like in the last one, the rhyming lines were 1st and 4th instead of 2nd and 4th, like the rest of the lines. but otherwise it was great! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    This really represents friendship and God and whatnot.

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great poem! Love the wording. You are every talented poet keep it up!

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