by ShootingStar179 Nov 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
So do you realize that you treat me like a child? |
by Leona
This is great... excellent job |
I really liked the last verse of this poem. it was written with alot of emotion. well done bub |
by MyDevotion
Poem is definatly truthful when it comes down to it. i really enjoy how you captivate the reader by sort of telling a story while still sticking to the rules of poetry, excellent read! 5/5 |
Ouch.. harsh poem.. but definilty your best becuase the emotion is there and its strong.. the flow is good as well as the rhyme.. the last stanza is weird because its not the same length as the others but its a great ending.. nice job with this one |
This poem reflects very eloquently a specific example of the law of karma |