Aww... this is so sad. it reminds me of a lot of poetry i write about this guy who i really REALLY like... and he has a girlfriend. (hence the new name lovingandnotlovedback)

okay well, 5/5
Allanah

How could you not see?
She'd been falling for you secretly
^^^
I really like these lines, theyre really easy to relate too, its a great ending.

Your rhyming was good throughout the poem, great use of vocab.
The flow was also good but the last stanza was abit off.
still a 5/5 from me, keep writing!

~Murder.

This is a very nice poem!
really liked it alot...
the flow was good...
yet it was so sad!
it was well written...
keep it up!

Nice twist at the end...i liked it. 5/5

Aww this poem is so sad... but i like it a lot. 5/5 Excellent job ^^

I think that it all fits and connects perfectly. 8) *

I really like it,
although some bits where really confusing.
keep it up,
love blue

Love it again

This is really good ! keep it up!