Original Sin

I'm not sure what it is about this, but I love it. It has a very easy flow to it with a deep meaning. I liked the title.. that's what really brought me into the poem. Although it was short, you said alot in those few lines which is very hard to do. But obviously you have mastered that :) Great job on this! 5/5

Exellent work once again, i loved your ryhming, and overall a short poem with a great message... 5/5

This was short, but put very straight to the point. Lovely write. Keep it up, you're a great writer. 5/5
God Bless

~*Tay*~

Short, but very descriptive. I love your choice of words, striking, and bold. Great work!