Comments : I Won't Be There

  • 18 years ago

    by Raina

    I really like this poem it reminds me of my situation a little bit excallent!! 5/5

  • "It's all your fault, you ruined everything." LOVE IT!!!!!

    seriously, if I told you that this was a typical good poem...that would be such an understatement. I really love how you rhymed and the words and how everythign was said. I felt so much emotion, not only from what I can imagine from your side, but also from how it related to me. 7/5

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    Again, that was great. you continue to wow me with how you can put your emotions out there on the table so...beautifully :) there was only one thing, and i dont think it was what you meant to write:

    I thought you cared, why and I ALWAYS wrong?

    did you mean to put "why was I..."?

    but thats it from here. great write!