6 Minuits to live

by SomeonesAngel   Nov 11, 2006


Scars bleeding,
Heart Still beating,
Why haven't I gone yet?

Eyes crying,
Feeling dying,
Take me away from here.

Eyes closing,
Forever dozing,
Never wanted to be here.

Veins aching,
Hands shaking,
I went to far this time.

Mistakes made, what have I done
In my battle I have won,
Oh won't you save me from myself?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Lynn

    I like this one a lot

  • 17 years ago

    by Shamar

    "Veins aching,Hands shaking,I went to far this time." I love that part. Why is it that we do our best work when where in pain? I love your style.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad poem! Your pain and loneliness can be felt! Great job on the writing! Hope things get better for you!

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