Wow, very good, very sad, deep and emotional.
keep writing, there's talent there.
xxxx

WOW so very powerful

I think that your writing is very good. And I think that it would make a great song. Umm... yeah I really relate to it tho and so I think that people enjoy poems alot more if you can relate...soo... great job!

Except for not being into the whole "baby" and "honey"...I really liked this poem! It was excellent and I thought it could almost be a song because of the repition. Great job! 5/5

~jas~