Dannng this poem has serious power. i loved the ending! Just simply amazing! your writing style is so unique! 5/5

Dang britt shesh....

Very sad but at the same time fantastic!
Of the poems i've read of yours up to now i'd say this one was my favourite.
5/5

Short and simple words.. but still you get the emotions out... i write that way as well.. great job!

Wow, very nice poem. I can see how it derived from the quote. It was so heartfelt and full of painful sorrows. I could imagine the scene in my head. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5

This poem was great men can be so horrible to women and i it that we just take it, i loved the poem 5/5

I really liked this poem..it was so sad.. i've heard that quote before too. and its great that you could actually write a poem to fit that subject. good job!

*michelle*