God mindy.
yur poem is juss plain awesome.
i like how yu described him. makes me want him too.

juss kidding.
please don't kill me O=D

it reminds me of Chase XP

Beautiful

I know how you feel...if only what we want we could have...and if it turns out bad...if only we could go back..i loved the flow and the whole plot of the poem good work...keep it up.

Aww. I love how you were describing each and everyone of the sweet things that he did or was like. It just helped build up the emotion for the end, when you put for you it's love but to him you're just friends. He sounds like an incredible guy, what every girl dreams of in life! ;) The last stanza was by far my favorite and I really enjoyed this poem also because the flow was perfect and the rhyming wasn't forced at all. Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Wow, Again, amazing work- I can really identify with how you feel. (believe me, I've been there, too!) 5/5

Great poem. I can relate. I only wish that it was a little longer. But other then that it is great the way it is. Another 5/5.

Cute. =] Yet sad because of the way you feel.
He sounds like an amazing guy, that all girls want.
I like how you described each and every loving or caring thing he did, it added a little extra to the poem.
Wonderful flow and great vocabulary.
Overall, fantastic job! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanei