by ForeverYoung Nov 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
-The Broken Mess You See- |
by Marc Ortiz
Oh wow! Another beautifully penned poem! You're really good at writing sad poems! keep up the good work! I really like the rhyming of the poem, keep it up. Flow was smooth, I like your choice of words! |
by LadyPearl
You are on a good enough level to experiment with other styles. I would like to see some of your future free-styles. Beautiful poem once again. I can really relate to |
by Mousie
Wow that is amazing! beautiful job, you're a great writer. 5/5 |
Beautifully filled with emotion. I noticed a few times you used commas where they really weren't necessary, but anyhow, the writing was fabulous. |
by Rachel
This poem explains just what I'm feeling. Very well written. =] |