Another poem with great meaning and good flow very sad and stunning 5/5 i have a poem similar to this one on the same topic called baby, i love you check it out well done

I like how this is set out. watch out that you delete all the ' marks. like the first word.

i still gave it a 5. good set out. i will read more. and thanx specially for the comment on my first poem. really means a lot. and is true. i love her lots.

i'll keep reading yours and comment. they are just so good!

David