I KNOW A LOT OF YOU ARE READING/RATING THIS, BUT ID GREATLY APPRECIATE COMMENTS TO GO WITH THOSE RATINGS IN ORDER TO HELP ME IMPROVE (THIS IS MY FIRST TRIOLET)- THANKS SO MUCH!!
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I'm lost without you near me
But there's nothing left for me to do
I just wish that you could see
I'm lost without you near me
In your arms is the only place I want to be
If you only knew
I'm lost without you near me
But there's nothing left for me to do
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*a triolet consists of eight lines, and has a rhyme scheme of: ABaAabAB
