Angel's Tune

by Mousie   Nov 12, 2006


Pain it tears inside me
As I remember your sweet face,
The one that taught me all my life
My true and saving grace.

Voices echo your loving name
Grief it blankets us,
Three years has come to pass
The tears are just a must.

Cry for hours in my bed
Of unforsaken thoughts,
It's not like I can bring you back
Or even have a talk.

So to the sky I sing my song
Of hope and gratitude,
Praying you will here it there
And sing back the angel's tune.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god,
    this one was amazing as well,
    you are a great writer dear. keep up the great job as always,

  • 18 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    I like how everything just goes together nice job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Okay, it's official - I LOVE your poetry. This was beautiful. I know what it feels like to want to bring a person back, so I can definitely relate.

    "Grief it blankets us" -- this line, I loved. I'm not all too sure why, haha. I just love the image which came from the word "blankets". It fitted perfectly.

    Excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Awww! Such a sad poem. Very deep and meaningful. So much emotian throughout it. The imagery was really cool. Had a great flow! A very beautiful poem. Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    I promise you she hears it. . .did your grandma teach you to write??? if so she musta been pretty good, 5/5

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