I really liked this one its ur best

-dying beauty
sherri

Oooh. Very pretty. I'm lovin' it, yo. =)
5/5 It may be sad, but it made me happy.

On your profile I think you spelled Liars wrong. Sorry if you meant something else.

Hey,
I so love this one, the flow is good and the rhyming is done quite good too, it somehow made me smile at the end of the poem even though its a sad poem, oh well im kind of strange^_^ 5/5
kisses stephanie

Excellent poem I loved it

...lost and subdued by your thoughts regarding the future?

This certainly grabbed my interest. While reading this piece, I remembered the line of a particular book that I just read recently. It says, "The present is a gift. That is why the present is called the present." =] One doesn't have to linger in the past nor does one have to think about the uncertain future. It is uncertain, unless one focuses on the present moment...

I quite enjoyed reading this piece. My pleasure to read. Nice work, nonetheless! xD

Debbie