I dont know do we go??
-dying beauty

Hey,
a nice little poem, but I think It could be better if you make it longer, but thats just my opinion, 4/5
kisses stephanie

Great poem brief but to the point

Reading this piece reminds me of a certain person wondering about the essence of Life and then writing his/her thoughts down on a sheet of paper so to preserve this fleeting moment. It certainly strucked a chord with me because I've been there as well, asking the same questions as yours. I just thought that there's too much telling rather than showing.
I quite liked it though. Nice work, nonetheless. =]

Debbie

Just....wonderful....
i love it!!! idk how to explain hhahah...
5/5
plz check out sum of my poems! ^^

--**Skye~